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Krishankins
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0 posted 2002-07-14 12:02 PM



A withered spirit, drained of love
That knew a moistened bliss
The wine once shared from grapes of love
Now sting the lips once kissed

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

© Copyright 2002 Kristopher Hankins - All Rights Reserved
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
1 posted 2002-07-14 12:39 PM


A good vintage is hard to find!
But when we do it's certainly worth the bouquet!  Hope this isn't a real life story
about sour grapes.  

brian sites
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2 posted 2002-07-14 03:12 AM


liked this one Kris
I've thought this before but could never
be so succinct
BS.

I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles

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3 posted 2002-07-21 10:11 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Kristopher, this is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and hope this is not a current feeling you have! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Suetang
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4 posted 2002-07-21 10:20 PM


Hello Kris

I am constantly in awe at the way you write and the enormous impact it has on the reader.
Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

the_loner_23
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
5 posted 2002-07-21 10:21 PM


How sweet this is

Cold hands means a warm heart

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2002-07-21 10:33 PM


I've said it before and I'll say it again!
Dang!! You're Good!!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05
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Michigan
7 posted 2002-07-21 11:04 PM


Its almost time to harvest the grapes here in Michigan...
I love your sweet grapy poem, Kris...
~ a toast to fine wine and fine poetry and lots of hugs too

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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