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Whispering I Love You!!
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Whispering I Love You!! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Alone swinging gently in the breeze where laughter once was heard a smile was seen a kiss given Where a child felt free felt safe to fly into clouds chasing rainbows and dreams Alone No longer swinging in the breeze laughter has faded replaced by tears, fears and prayers. God protect her Keep this child safe as each sun rises upon a tiny face. Whisper to her Tell her she is loved She is not forgotten Tell her ..... I love her... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Magnus, this is so sad and soft.It made me sigh and then tears flowed. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your Whispers will be heard, the wind shall carry them...and the sun helps make the wind move, you know...oh indeed, yes it does... Karilea |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Magnus - such emotion - this tugged at my heart - you reached in and got me - I loved the poem - thanks - Paul |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Barry Once again your words have the power to move me. This was simply beautiful. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry I hear tears in these words...and so much love and concern. Heart hugs to you, my friend. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Barry, such a heart-wrenching write. The winds will carry your words of love... ~Hugs gentle man~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Barry, this is so very sad, sweet friend, I know this feeling ever so well for I used to be a lonely child like her but I know because I have gotten through it all that with all my heart she too will prevail and will be loved by so so many very soon! (sigh) My thoughts and feelings are with her, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much!  May love and light awlays swhine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling heart this is perfect and so very very heart wrenching. It echoes with love and tears, truly wonderful heart and soul’s feeling here. I love the trace of love that overlays this like a veil of wonder. YOU shine darling heart you really do. This is superb writing and I love it utterly, as always the phrases flow down the page in smooth and truthful cascade. Absolutely perfect writing and I love it well written and always special from you. I love it utterly utterly love it As always Mushy   Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Such deep sadness... so beautifully expressed... Oh Barry, this just tugs at my heartstrings ~ teary hugsLyra |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Sorry that I missed this. Every time the wind blows, she will feel love stroke her cheek...every child does. ThisDiamond |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Speechless Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
This is so very beautiful... emotional and impressive!!! Neeraja |
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