Open Poetry #21 |
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Plum Blossoms (13000TH POST) |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(I've dreamed of my Joanna so so much lately, who I love with all my heart and we may meet this summer too, which makes me feel so happy and excited that I have thought of her so much and this is one vision I had of her that made me feel so lovesick and happy! I love you Joanna! ![]() Plum Blossoms By: Noah Eaton 6/26/02 There you stand out on the beach of my dreams Wearing a wool and alpaca cardigan You kiss the wind You kiss my heart and I wake again I watch the wind buffet your shoulders Revealing your lingerie of grace beneath You scatter rose petals against the tangerine morning light Which could smother any winter sky with kisses so lovely You characterize every orchid and forest of bamboo Through this crepuscule I wake to the kiss of your eyelashes swoon Like a betel palm you shake my tambourine I scream in rapture opening my eyes, knowing there you'll be These plum blossoms You plant in my heart Grow and grow to the sky As the love that you are Shedding with flowers all about Smiling as you hold me close Reminding me Of a time When I wished upon a star You are like a priceless treasure I found in my hearts desert Your smiles are engraved in majolica, making my world a dessert I watch you decorate my windows with curtains of crepe suzette Every kiss I share with you is like sweet Coeur à la Crème with raspberry coulis You characterize every orchid and forest of bamboo Through this crepuscule I wake to the kiss of your eyelashes swoon Like a betel palm you shake my tambourine I scream in rapture opening my eyes, knowing there you'll be These plum blossoms You plant in my heart Grow and grow to the sky As the love that you are Shedding with flowers all about Smiling as you hold me close Reminding me Of a time When I wished upon a star I used to think That the proper way to play a tambourine Was to slap it with my palm Now I've heard your sweet samba I tap this tambourine gently And tap it with my magic fingers calm... Gazing lovesickly in your eyes As I sing to you... You characterize every orchid and forest of bamboo Through this crepuscule I wake to the kiss of your eyelashes swoon Like a betel palm you shake my tambourine I scream in rapture opening my eyes, knowing there you'll be These plum blossoms You plant in my heart Grow and grow to the sky As the love that you are Shedding with flowers all about Smiling as you hold me close Reminding me Of a time When I wished upon a star "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (06-28-2002 12:35 AM).] |
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nnie Junior Member
since 2002-05-17
Posts 14 |
hey congrats on ur 13000th post. glad ur inlove with someone. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
![]() ![]() You are such a sweetheart and so generous with your replies! What a wonderful post for this milestone! ~Hugs to my Sidekick!~ |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Smiling as you hold me close Reminding me Of a time When I wished upon a star Congrats, Noah! Hope you two get to meet soon and it goes as great as Tracey and me, finally meeting. Keep wishes on those stars!! Forgetting all I'm lacking |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Congratulations! A truly beautiful poem to add to my collection. Deb |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Noah...hope good things happen for you and Joanna....congratulations on 13000 posts...James |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Congratulations on your happiness, and on your 13,000th post, Noah... well done! |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Another milestone crossed??? When do you find time for sleep Noah??? Lol.. Lovely poem…and I can highly recommend finally meeting in person. You two should definitely try it!! Everything is possible in the game of life |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
congs on your 13000th post ![]() ![]() |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
So romantic! Joanna must be a SOME lady ! mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Your beautiful love shines in this Noah!! Contratulations on finding true love and on your 13,000th post. ![]() |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I love this, Noah, especially the ending. How perfect. May all your wishes come true. Sandra |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
13,000 POSTS. CONGRATULATIONS and we all are endebted to you for the wonder and praise you bring to each one of us. You are quite the young man. I love this poem so much. This line is especially touching: '...You are like a priceless treasure I found in my hearts desert...' I just know Joanna is going to adore it! Hugs, Marti " My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother." |
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mable_sue Junior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 25Iowa |
not many men so vividly express their emotions...I think the poem to be very soft....it beats like a heart in love. Congrats to you. Liz |
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shadow74 Junior Member
since 2002-06-26
Posts 12MI, Water world |
Ah, sweet love comforts the heart. Best to you and your love. Congradulations Throw your heart out in front of you |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I so love how your words dance and fill the air. I hope it happens for you two. Lovely writing, the celebration is two fold!! Here's to you Noah! ![]() Congratulations~ |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Congratulations on your milestone, M'toe... your great poems and generous replies are both appreciated. This is lovely. *S* |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
First of all dear Noah, congratulations. Oh my goodness 13,000. How did you do it? I think you started out around the same time I did. Good wishes for you and Joanna. How can she resist? Love, Joyce |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Noah, you are such a love puppy! Congratulations on the 13,000th post. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Noah Congratulations on your 13000th post. Your love literally shines through your words. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
That Joanna must be the luckiest girl on earth!!! With someone who writes such a beautiful poem for her... |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Noah...beautiful words for a special person. and you are certainly a posting puppy, are you not?!?!?!?!?!?! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Superbly crafted with love.....excellent vocabulary too! |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Noah, absolutely lovely poem and congrats. Hope to see many more. |
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Singing Sparrow Member
since 2002-05-12
Posts 94 |
awesome, love it! ![]() SS |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so romantic. I hope to meet Liam too one day. ![]() Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Noah, Glad I stopped in to read this remarkable poem about your Love and your dream and to tell you "congratulations" for your 13,000th post here at Passions. Both are remarkable attributes as are you my poet friend. GOD bless and keep you both safe and in his loving care. -Bob |
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