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Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2002-07-12 05:02 PM

Labor Of Love
~*Marge Tindal*~

Out across a pregnant morn
Poem waiting to be born
Ejaculating thoughts of inspire
Birthing verse from depth of desire~

Seed-of-need in poetic yearn
Blending ink of choice
Inhale of poetic dreams
Anticipating gift of voice~

Labor of love has begun
Breath of poet in exhale
Dip of quill in ink-of-think
Etch of words in full regale~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-07-12 05:03 PM

Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

2 posted 2002-07-12 05:05 PM

SIGH

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2002-07-12 05:46 PM

Marge

What a lovely metaphor!

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

4 posted 2002-07-12 05:48 PM

Beautiful Marge!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2002-07-12 05:53 PM

Marge,
Lovely read, enjoyed.

Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

6 posted 2002-07-12 06:05 PM

Margie girl darling sister of my heart this is especially lovely, the lines of this delight are superb, truly awesome. Yet again you’ve spun words into magic and spread them in a carpet of light. How beautifully you’ve written of the birth of love how delicately you’ve traced loves’s warmth with your amazing artistic eye. Do I love this? …….

You KNOW I do, never ever do you fail to lift a poem up to the heights of wondrous beauty.

This is truly exquisite writing and I love it love it love it utterly.

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

7 posted 2002-07-12 07:13 PM

Sometimes when you think of it in those terms, it doesn't make since to call it labor. But hey ............. I'm a guy so what would I KNOW of it anyway. LOL Beautiful to see your name again.

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

8 posted 2002-07-12 07:41 PM

I have thought all of those things but never so beautifully - your metaphor is just so wonderful - thanks for a wonderful poem - Paul

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

9 posted 2002-07-12 07:45 PM

Marge: Outstanding poem and sometimes they are a labor of love. Not all of them are easy!

Betty Lou Hebert

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2002-07-12 07:49 PM

Lovely Marge!
~Hugs~

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

11 posted 2002-07-12 10:06 PM

I love the whole birthing sequence metaphor here....
a beautiful poem, Marge and I am so glad to see you back.
I hope you are feeling better.

~ newborn hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

12 posted 2002-07-15 09:16 AM

I'm a strong gal... and stubborn... I can ignore dares. *G* (especially when I don't have the nerve to take them! LOL) Other than the "I love this" part... refer to email and keep my secrets.... purty puh-leez? LOL

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

13 posted 2002-07-16 09:11 AM

Beautiful Marge...simple beautiful.

Charisma

cpalmer
Senior Member

since 2001-06-26

Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

14 posted 2002-07-16 09:45 AM

Marge,
Outstanding dear friend!
Hugs
Cindi

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

15 posted 2002-07-25 12:35 PM

*Lordy, Lordy ... I am remiss in *thanks*~

Forgive me ... must have had a *baby poem* to tend~

Loner~
Thanks so much~

OneSlickLady~
I appreciate it~

Martie~
Awwwww ... you lift my spirits~

SuzieQ~
Thankee sweet friend~

Seymour~
Thank you my friend~

MarshaLove~
I just love it when your reply is longer than the poem ....
Oh ... when isn't it ??
You KNOW I love you soooooo utterly~

MarkB~
quote:
I'm a guy so what would I KNOW of it anyway.

Pick me up off the floor !!! LOL !
ROTFLMLCBO !
Yeppers ... I like it when you cut right to the heart of it~

GoodKnight~
Thank you VERY much~

BettyLou~
No ... not all are 'easy' ...
but after the birthing ... they are soooooo cute !

Enchantress~
Thanks gal~

Lyra~
Thank you ... it's good to feel better~
I'm on the healing train ... chugging along~

SuthernGal~
LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL .... it was STILL the BEST 'you-ain't-gonna-share-it' reply !
You crack me up !!!!
Literally !!!!

Charisma~
Awwwww ... thank you pretty lady~

Cindi~
Thanking you sweetie ... always good to share with you~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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