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ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2002-07-12 12:25 PM

With each wave of amber ray
   peaceful and golden blind
   she stretches the end of day
   so dreams may not cloud her mind

And between each guiding light
   of which life's day thus start
   blindly searching for her night
   she bleeds from a warming heart

Crimson rivers flood the sky
   hues blending sunset's soul
   baring lifelong questions why
   sunsets come, and days must go

create an addiction .... share a smile!!

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-07-12 12:29 PM

That is just beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-07-12 12:59 PM

I do so like finding

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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2002-07-12 01:09 PM

I've missed your words, Craig... beautiful as they are.

~smiling~
M

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

4 posted 2002-07-12 01:46 PM

Just a dream away......

Lauren~

The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket
I lean against the wind pretend I am weightless and in this moment I am happy

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

5 posted 2002-07-12 02:03 PM

she stretches the end of day
so dreams may not cloud her mind

Some really good lines in this! Enjoyed.

You wanna tell 'em about the mmmmmm sound or should I?

GoddessofHell
Member

since 2002-07-09

Posts 76

6 posted 2002-07-12 02:06 PM

And between each guiding light
   of which life's day thus start
   blindly searching for her night
   she bleeds from a warming heart

Beautiful!

Heather

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

7 posted 2002-07-12 06:50 PM

This was stunning Craig, as is all of your work.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

8 posted 2002-07-12 07:56 PM

breathtaking poetry - images and feeling and thought abound evoked by these wonderful words - Thanks Paul

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

9 posted 2002-07-12 08:02 PM

Such warm images, it touched me deeply
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2002-07-12 08:02 PM

(smiles) Oh Craig, this is wonderful, sweet friend, yes, may all those who desire and dream of this happiness keep on dreaming and see all their dreams come true in the night before the morning comes! (big hugggssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

11 posted 2002-07-12 08:25 PM

I am new here and was just so very delighted to read this poem...superbly exquisite! aloha, Cher

aloha... with warm regards

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

12 posted 2002-07-12 09:01 PM

Beautiful in every way, Craig.
Sandra

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