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Summer Easing
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Summer Easing |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Summer Easing pulled a thread the other day, almost leaving me naked with thoughts unraveling the past began to leave its desired effect forgotten were the moments of hurt, and the more I moved, the shorter the memory until the ease of the night brought peace in the sound of the cool air blowing softly... listening only to the music made by the garden chimes "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Ohhh my god, this poem is great, I loved it . L.of.L. Tom . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, You have to watch which threads you pull. LOL Enjoyed.  |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Maureen - this is a wonderful poem - one ponders how many of those threads we have and whether we should pull them of let them be - I think oour poetry reflects our thread pulling to use your wonderful metaphor - loved it - Paul |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Maureen, are you becoming unravelled? - if so it's a wonderful way to go. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
angelswing ...well I don't know about great, but I have been having my thread pulled slowly for awhile and if it keeps up my nakedness will definitely begin to show *s thank you  M Sy, You are funny...so what's a little bareness every now and then??? I am hoping to feel well enough to come to Florida in the fall, would be wonderful to meet you all...Did I tell you I also love Knights?..well good ones that is... thank you Paul for reading my words and responding so kindly. I enjoy your responses. hugss M..and I am going to have to reweave those threads someday soon..hey what an inspiration you are..*s |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Hey Keth...I think I have been unraveling for about 3 years now..maybe its finally coming to an end..I am beginning to feel rather naked..and I thought I already was way back when..maybe I am shedding my skin now..and learning a thing or two to toughen this new one. hugsss M |
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