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Exotic Saddle
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Exotic Saddle |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Exotic Saddle I ride a dragon broke to sit The bucking dance was won by wit And now I fly exotic zones That once near broke my back and bones And there I built a taradiddle A Taj Mahal of wit and fiddle While slipping through the slip of streams And sorting out my cape of dreams It is a mixture made of wile With contents of a secret file But each must stir a new brew mix The game is played like pick up sticks. And randy dragon flies me there He flies me through the real we bare We fly into an egos sky Where alter egos vie in sigh So if you find me fast in reap Please pass me bye and let me sleep. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
WHO CAN SLEEP???? I have ridden some creatures, but never have I ventured far enough into Hobbit land to find a dragon saddle...um..may I ask? JUST WHAT KIND OF SADDLE HORN DOES THAT BOAST? GRIN...all a quiver...growing scales even... oh. g'morning?  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, Good morning dear. what saddle horn, I ride him bare back. LOL  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And now I fly exotic zones That once near broke my back and bones And there I built a taradiddle A Taj Mahal of wit and fiddle While slipping through the slip of streams And sorting out my cape of dreams ====================================== But each must stir a new brew mix The game is played like pick up sticks. And randy dragon flies me there He flies me through the real we bare We fly into an egos sky Where alter egos vie in sigh So if you find me fast in reap Please pass me bye and let me sleep. ===================================== Who would dare disturb you while in wile? who would dream of disturbing you in a rhyme scheme dream? I'll just hop on and ride along  and these lines: "And there I built a taradiddle A Taj Mahal of wit and fiddle" are the too cool for school lines of the day I do so love the way you diddle rhymes fiddle way cool poem of vision and imagery Stinky... it was about time Randy got some air time *L* I'll keep me eyes to the skys for Sy fly byes  *winkiewinkie*   Now for me some words come easy |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
What a fascinating, ride, Sey! Enjoyed. *s When you think you have read it all, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, I'm glad you don't mind my taradiddle It is one of my weaknesses. Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky chansondegeste A delightfull comment, thank you. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Okay Sy...I have to admit the title pulled me in. This is an exquisite piece and I much enjoyed the ride! ~Morning hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Enchantress Good morning and hugs to you, I hope you have the best of days. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling boy this is simply exquisite, I love it when your words are wrapped in dragon flight. Mmmmm this is just too delicious for words. And again you fly my mind into fairyland where dreams are sprinkled with starlight and moonlight is reflected back from dragons multifaceted eyes. How beautiful the flow and the ease of this delight and as always darling heart your words shine like no other. Do I love this? YES YES YES I love it utterly utterly utterly. Beautifully written and perfectly presented. As I said this is exquisite As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
wonderful puzzles woven into a fascinating poem - thansk for a great read - Paul |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
You could be Aurora if you keep dreaming sunch whimsy's Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sir sy of the rhyme you galloped this steed on drumskins with shout hooves pleased to admire the resulting read |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
And there I built a taradiddle A Taj Mahal of wit and fiddle I love the word play here, Sy.... as well as the rest of the poem, of course.  ~ grinning hugsLyra |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Hey Sy with you sat beside it would be a fun ride Hope |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"And there I built a taradiddle A Taj Mahal of wit and fiddle While slipping through the slip of streams And sorting out my cape of dreams" (smiles) Oh Seymour, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I too enjoyed the roller-coaster ride of this journey, sweet friend, this is another classic gem of yours, we all love you so much, YAY!!! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy What JM said...with a wink! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
While slipping through the slip of streams And sorting out my cape of dreams... You make it look so, so easy.... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I have as much fun reading your responses as I do your poems some days..*s you do have a whimsical mind. M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, Your comments are over whelming. Love them Paul, Thank you for the read and nice reply. Keth, Not much else to do at this stage. LOL Dark Stranger, Pleased you liked amigo. Lyra, Hugs back sweety, HopeS, It would be fun to have you along. Noah, Always enjoy reading your remarks. Martie, Sunshine, Your to young for it to be easy. Maureen, Thank you sweet. |
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