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Open Poetry #21

When You are Here

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2002-07-09 10:35 AM

When you come runnning to me
you looked at me
Can't get off my eyes
When you are here
With me
Holding my hand
Longing words
To hear
You slowly you said
three words
I have been waiting for
When you are not here
Your love remains
In my heart
Wished those spical moments
Would come again
Realize
How I miss you
Thinking
How time flew away
When you are here
you dance with me
you never give a chance
How I feel about you?
Now
When you are here
You told me
How true love Is
We should carry on
Because love Is strong
Never been wrong
When you are here
I feel like Iam In heaven
Am I dreaming
When you are here

[This message has been edited by vandana (07-09-2002 10:37 AM).]

haydenjames
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 164
Antigua & Barbuda

1 posted 2002-07-09 10:44 AM

"Love"ly!

My poetry is at: http://www.thehayden.org

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2002-07-09 10:52 AM

Vandana,
A sincere write, enjoyed.

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

3 posted 2002-07-09 11:18 AM

Vandana, this is wonderful! You put the feelings of needing that love all the time into words, and did it exceptionally, too! Great write!!

Open the door and let your adventure begin!!!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-07-09 06:08 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I wish for your love to always be there for you from her eon in and offer you the heavens you deserve so much! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2002-07-12 05:32 PM

May the beauty of love continue...James

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