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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I am moon milk-- face reflects a nothing's pale-- I am corn silk-- chrysalis, of shuddered wing-- I am shadow's darkness sing. I breathe word into my lung... I exhale the exclamate. I am border, trading bead. I am reckless--I'm pirate. I am hoist of cross and bone-- I am cloth of flag's atone. I trace fingers on your scars... I feel your skin in braille I am measured earth to mars-- I'm venus in a comet's tail. I am weary cloth on pole-- edges speak in tattered told. I am weary moth unfold-- philosopher in grasp of stone. I drink brandy from a flask- making love in long lashed mask-- I am Venice--mardi gras-- candeliered in crown--Lapin... *with winks* [This message has been edited by serenity (07-12-2002 05:50 AM).] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms serene you are vixen here and you have the lights on too spank you very much |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I am smiling. Period. well...perhaps not just smiling...  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I am moon milk-- face reflects a nothing's pale-- I am corn silk-- chrysalis, of shuddered wing-- I am shadow's darkness sing. =================================== I trace fingers on your scars... I feel your skin in braille I am measured earth to mars-- I'm venus in a comet's tail. I am weary cloth on pole-- edges speak in tattered told. I am weary moth unfold--  philosopher in grasp of stone. I drink brandy from a flask- making love in long lashed mask-- I am Venice--mardi gras-- candeliered in crown--Lapin... ======================================== while Sun shines and smiles...I am doing MOTH HAPPY DANCE...and then Im getting me worship knee pads out... DO YOU KNOW HOW COOL THIS IS???? The imagery alone makes me giddy... then add the metaphor..analogy and word play...then the rhyme and cadence...Im dizzy ...Im weak in the knees very very cool write me twin ya know that last verse has me smiling... send those vials baby..me muse is parched mothyme  Now for me some words come easy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity You just can't out do JM. Your write is excellent one of your best.  |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Serenity..winged tease,carnevalesque piece..gets me to grin too  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
*smiling here* YES!!! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
just hopping around the forum here and thought I'd pop in to express my gratitude--thanks all for taking the time to read. I am ever grateful! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You're deep cool.......and yes, you am all those things.......!!! |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
Mind blowingly rocking and cool. I love how empowered your poems are!written in blood before everything went black |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I am in desire of you...James |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Awesome Karen~ I need to take lessons from you.... Lauren~ The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket |
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woodtic Member
since 2002-01-06
Posts 87 |
Ouch! I hate when I burn in the cool sights of your smokin words. I love when I freeze solid at the firey images you evoke. I can't stand the pleasure of the read and must sit down to readjust. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. I love talkin brail. |
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