can you whisper me a moment?

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Open Poetry #21

can you whisper me a moment?

Ryan
Member

since 1999-06-10

Posts 297
Kansas

0 posted 2002-07-12 02:31 AM

in between sorghum
fields, rusting tractors
debate the humidity.

ringing in the distance--
ice cream man or
train to Santa Fe?

in the summer sky,
Venus--only a lamp reflecting
in the window.

summer leaves
fall; now the trees
are all naked

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-07-12 06:39 AM

Welcome to my world.
Enjoyed, Ryan!
The sparcity of the pen
considering our drought
fit very well.

angelswing
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since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

2 posted 2002-07-12 09:37 AM

Wow, lovely poem, the imagery is cool .
L.of.L. Tom .
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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-07-12 11:50 AM

Beautiful poem

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Cold hands means a warm heart

Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

4 posted 2002-07-12 11:57 AM

very good poetry - lots of images evoked and very well written - thanks - Paul

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-07-12 09:04 PM

(smiles) WOW!!! Oh my gosh, I love this, sweet friend, this is filled with such an irresistable view of nature, I love it, we all love you so much!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-07-12 09:07 PM

Excellent write...
Fantastic imagery.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

7 posted 2002-07-12 10:33 PM

Short and powerful, just the way way I like poetry.
write on
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

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