Open Poetry #21 |
Eternal Flame |
Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Changes strike beyond the peace And wake the calm desire Lights of stay will laugh of hopes Our love will burn like fire A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
with poetry like that the flames will indeed burn eternally - very well written poetry - I really enjoyed it - Paul |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kris, I think you need a longer pencil...these are like peanuts and I always want more! |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Hope wills the flame to kiss each candle goodnight... you sure do inspire me sometimes!!! Take care Kris!!! hugs from me~ Tanya Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Wonderful work Cold hands means a warm heart |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Love it Sandra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I love how you say so much with so few words and do it so perfectly, Kris... ~ hugs and grins Lyra |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
burn baby...burrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrnnn |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Absolutely stunning! I am in motion |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
As I'm out there, walking, searching, for myself, for you.... won't you join me? Let's walk this journey together. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kris~ VERY nice~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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