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Open Poetry #21
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the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
0 posted 2002-06-12 10:18 PM


The winds speed up
The waves crash up over the sand.
Waves twenty or thirty feet high
Wash away
the beach houses
The people that didn't leave shriek curses
The eye of the storm appears in the sky
But after an hour the eye passes by
and the storm starts again
That is how I
Describe a hurricane.

Cold hands means a warm heart
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Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296
Michigan
1 posted 2002-06-12 10:23 PM

You probably get lots of hurricanes in Florida, Julie....
a very descriptive poem.

~ windy hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks
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