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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-07-11 07:13 PM


The River of My
Love's Sweet Flow

Let not your heart become
so emotionally emcumbered
that it knows not where the source
of it's strength does lie.
For I drank anew from loves
magic potion the moment I gazed
into her romantic eyes.

And from that moment I knew
the source that would quench
the thirst within my soul.
And the love from my heart
grows daily as I partake from the
river of my love's sweet flow.

JamesLee
July11
2002
Jin


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Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15
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1 posted 2002-07-11 07:14 PM


what a lovely poem - wonderful images of drinking from a fountain of love - thanks for the great poem - Paul
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2 posted 2002-07-11 07:18 PM




(smiles) Oh James, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, yes, the more you give the more you get for the sea of life will continue to provide water to the streams of our hearts! (big hugggsssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
3 posted 2002-07-11 07:25 PM


That was simply beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05
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Michigan
4 posted 2002-07-11 07:35 PM


Romanticism combined with lovely poetry...
a winning combination, James
~ smiling hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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