Open Poetry #21 |
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A Note to a Love |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
A Note to a Love It was ever effortless To turn my reflection to you To mirror your eyes And shiver your skin For you heard me last eve That sound that came to your heart Do you remember how it Reverberated along your spine? A passing thought, Come to stay in your heart To nestle in, Make a home To grow you young again Allowing your reach to cross miles Trust me love, Even effortless requires endeavor And I will always give that To you. [This message has been edited by Elan (07-11-2002 06:09 PM).] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms E.. this is a slender thread of silver pressed between amber morning way cool ms E |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elan What Dark Stranger said, well done enjoyed |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
this is great poetry - thanks for a wonderful read - Paul |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Well noted...James |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Very beautifully written, Elan... ![]() Lyra |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
One word: Awesome Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
So beautiful, Elan! |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Élan darling girl how utterly utterly perfect is this, these words are silvered in starlight and arrayed in their best gown to bewitch and enchant. This is a note that rings from a crystal bell sweet and shimmering in the morning light. You know I love this note, beautifully written simple exquisite and elegant writing ![]() ![]() ![]() Love and warm stuff As always Mushy ![]() ![]() Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Beautiful! ~tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
ENJOY ![]() |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
It all seems so simple yet so many miss it. You NAILED it square and said it wonderfully. Truely enjoyed and your format made it a pleasure to gaze at as well as to read. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...Exquisite!!... |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this is a wonderful love letter you have written here, I LOVE IT!!! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elan, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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