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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands 
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If only you were here with me here with me today Instead of all those thousands lonely miles away Thoughts about us together are always in my mind Within my waking moments and in my dreams at night I would never get enough to see your handsome face To feel your arms around me the strength of your embrace But mijn lief I have to wait still a little longer While my love for you only will grow stronger.... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mein Lief... how lovely that sounds among the English words... you have a delicate pen, Neeraja... and your write lace... |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
an ode to the longing of love - thanks for a poem that weaves such loving images - Paul |
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jave Junior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 18CO, USA |
I like this. I know exactly how you feel absence makes the heaart grow fonder thanks for sharing |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A poem of love, a poem of longing.....written very beautifully and sensitively.  ~ poetic hugsLyra |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautifully written Cold hands means a warm heart |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Well said...someone we share love with is someone worth waiting for...James |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
ENJOYED  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Neeraja, this is wonderful, sweet friend, yes, keep on believing for your dreams are destined to come true as love can only grow if it is meant to be! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Neeraja, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
You are all so sweet with your comments on my poem!!! Thanks a lot!!! Neeraja |
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