Open Poetry #21 |
Unique Laws of Natural Love |
RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
For Tina; Who'd have thought in life's fourth quarter where I'm livin', that nature's laws would make distant halves whole? We weren't taught when Newton's orders were givin', that Love could gravitate two lonely souls. Objects at rest tend to stay at rest and those in motion maintain their way and speed. Should have guessed rhythms of the hidden breast whose force, emotion accelerate by need. Last night I drew my being to your supple form to renew our passion, freeing Love's rainstorm and I knew without seeing that your face transformed to a rosey glow whose rapture my heart warmed. Strong magnetic pull my hand, your sublime silhouette, Aurora Borealis to my eyes, nature rules side by side with dreamland, who would have bet south of Dallas lay northern sighs? "Happy people have no history" - French Proverb [This message has been edited by RSWells (07-11-2002 03:26 PM).] |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
great images and wonderful poetry - thanks for the very romantic look at nature and physics - Paul |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Very nice, and that last stanza...an EXCELLENT wind-up! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Richard Where love is concerned...not all the laws of physics apply. Enjoyed this, and the possitive feeling from it. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So...life is not just for the young... I think I've got it! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
richard...i don't know what type of magic tina has but it has you bubbling...keep it up !!!it is so good...helen |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
It is never to late for lovers, who would have thought? |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
"sweetness and light"~Swift Yes...love just looks splendid on you. Nods and hugs. Sincerely, Reg |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RSWells A delightful write and read, enjoyed. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
who would have bet south of Dallas lay northern sighs? ================== I have been south of Dallas and I didn't find anything as beautiful as you describe. You are blessed and your words show that you know it. Much enjoyed. |
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Music Maker Member
since 2002-07-07
Posts 152THE ORIGINAL !!!! |
Richard I am in lifes 'fifth' quarter, I think!!, but what splendiferous lines you write. I take one pace backwards to look upwards to you in awe!(and I am 6'3" tall)...You have the turn of phrase to woo the world, let alone your Tina. Kind thoughts John Grass won't grow under feet that don't move. [This message has been edited by Music Maker (07-14-2002 11:54 AM).] |
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