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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
Pride There is a kindness at my side a lass of letters that I pride You may not see her as she writes moves like a phantom through my nights I can not reach her ‘though so close just feel the whispers of a ghost I sometimes wonder when she’ll come from out the shadows touch me some I know there will be more to hear attentively I turn an ear And when the passion day has dawned these lines will tell what has been spawned © 070802 |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You've not yet named your muse, Sir? 'Tis a pity...I think she likes floating around your pen... give her a name, that she may amuse you some more... |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
nice poetry - liked it lots - Paul |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
...I sometimes wonder when she’ll come from out the shadows touch me some... Sir, did you feel that breathe of air? 'Twas your muse, Sir, your muse... |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I enjoyed this Cold hands means a warm heart |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
Very effective she is too! Thanks for reading. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggsssssss) Oh Arthur, I can feel such yearning in these words, I too know my love so well yet she is still a ghost in my arms and I yearn to hold her for real! (sigh) May all your desires come true, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Arthur, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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