Close & Tight (response to Possessed by 1slick_lady)

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Open Poetry #21

Close & Tight (response to Possessed by 1slick_lady)

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

0 posted 2002-07-05 03:20 AM

Close and Tight

Like a fog
in the night
wrapped around
close and tight
and his breath
is the breeze
caressing
with a tease
at your skin
he’ll attend
be gentle
as a friend
in his arms
you may stay
as he hides
you away
like a fog
in the night
wrapped around
close and tight

© 070502

S Arthur

. . . Hills jump with brooks.
trees tumble out of twigs and sticks;
e e cummings

[This message has been edited by S Arthur Grey (07-05-2002 03:25 AM).]

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

1 posted 2002-07-05 06:37 AM

s...this is beautiful...perfect match with mine...very nice...helen

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2002-07-05 07:22 AM

I like that metaphor!

"Like a fog
in the night
wrapped around
close and tight"

Neat!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-07-05 08:45 AM

Beautiful...I love it!!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

4 posted 2002-07-05 08:50 AM

Very nicely done, and the rhyme was close and tight.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

5 posted 2002-07-21 01:06 AM

Glad you all liked this, it was fun to do.
Thanks for reading.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-07-21 07:36 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Arthur, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I can feel the gentle tranquility and serenity of this, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Arthur, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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