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What we say speaks loudly
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What we say speaks loudly |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA 
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It does make a difference how we speak When we leave out a gender We leave out real people So many important ideas and things Are all associated with men – I could scream God, founding countries and movements, power and strength All assumed to be male – it doesn’t matter we say Or duck the real issues with “political correctness” escapes Here’s how it matters in my point of view Little girls grow up thinking only males can be Strong – powerful – or as discoverers All inclusive terms we use say males are the best I just want to shout to all who will hear It matters – it matters – just what we all hear If it really doesn’t matter then here is a thought Let’s let god be a she – let’s let founding mothers arise Let’s say she, and her Instead of he and him As we speak inclusively I have said this to many and guess what I have found It really does matter to those who feel bound To protect male dominance all over and around Well thanks for listening to this cry for a change Just think of the consequences the next time you start to say… And think that it matter how we speak always |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent, profound and very truthful write Paul. Very very well spoken...and, I agree, as will many others I'm sure. BTW... HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! AND MANY MANY MORE....  It's great having you here at Passions! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Paul darling boy and writer of supreme wisdom, have you any idea how spectacular this poem is? No probably not since you entirely lack conceit, then let me tell you darling heart it is awesome, and no I am not just saying that. Naturally the rhythm is perfect and the flow is utterly utterly spot on. This is simply perfect and I love it. You really shouldn’t get me started on the Women’s Movement as opposed to Feminists, because once started I would not stop. Okay I promise I will not give you a speech about why it is important to promote positive gender role models But this is a wonderful piece of writing and I thank you for it Perfect writing darling heart absolutely perfect  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy   Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Paul You know all us shes are going to agree but I have a thought instead of he, how about we This kind of thinking from a man makes me smile..thank you. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Nancy - thanks for the kind words and for the birthday wish - Paul Marsha - many thanks for your special words and comments and for the birthday wish - we will have a good discussion someday on gender role models - Paul loner - thanks - appreciate your read - Paul Martie - thanks for the comment and yes "we" would be a great way to get beyond "he" - Paul [This message has been edited by Goodknight (07-11-2002 11:49 AM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Very deep these words of wisdom Paul, thank you for sharing them. *s* Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  YAY!!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY, SWEET PAUL, I LOVE IT, NOW BLOW OUT YOUR CANDLES AND MAKE A WISH!!! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) This is a wonderful view of wisdom, sweet friend, yes, every action has a reaction and we must think before we respond, for our relations to one another is critical! (smiles) May this day be filled with happy birthday wishes and smiles, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paul, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (07-16-2002 07:59 PM).] |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Gentle Spirit - thanks for reading and commenting on this poem - they are words I try so hard to live by - Paul |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Noah - thanks for your birthday wish and for your kinds words of review and love - Paul |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Paul? I say shim.... enjoyed the read... and Happy Birthday, my good Sir... |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Sunshine - that is a good word - shim - thanks for the birthday wish and for the kind words - Paul |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I really enjoyed this poem, Paul and I agree with you about the gender issue. Personally, I think God is a woman because only a woman could get a world to run so smoothly in spite of all of the evil elements.  ~ happy birthday hugsLyra |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You've hit upon a good one here Paul... *start spreadin the word*  take care sweetie!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Lyra - thanks for your kind words and for the comments - I agree if god has gender it is female - Paul devina - thanks for your read and nice comments - I think it is a very important topic - Paul |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
wonderful thoughts you shared with us, love the way you present them. well done!! and happy belated birthday, hope you had a nice day. Charisma |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Charisma - thanks for your review and kind comments - I had a very nice birthday thanks - Paul |
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