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Open Poetry #21

Still in love

Daniel van Vliet
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since 2001-08-31

Posts 80

0 posted 2002-07-10 06:49 PM

Still in love.

I thought I saw her today,
a violin of beauty.
I wanted to take her hand
and smoother her in my tears.
She spoke softly like a thief
trying not to be seen in laughter
I threw my eyes upon the ground
desperately resisting her smile;
....... I know still love her.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-07-10 06:50 PM

Isn't love wonderful? Great poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Krissy
Senior Member

since 2002-02-22

Posts 556
kent England

2 posted 2002-07-10 06:52 PM

Daniel hi there Finally I get the chance to get on here and reply, it’s a nightmare, mum should be shot at dawn, but I don’t expect that I could get the court to convict her. I don’t think computercide is actually recognised as the crime it is.

This is a really wonderful piece of writing, the flow is exquisite your writing really is exceptional, and this flows like a dream. Beautiful and so well written, and oh do I know this feeling

Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Daniel van Vliet
Member

since 2001-08-31

Posts 80

3 posted 2002-07-11 12:35 PM

Thank-you.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2002-07-11 07:22 AM

I know I like this...James

Furie
Junior Member

since 2002-06-17

Posts 39
Myriad of Unkown Places

5 posted 2002-07-11 08:08 AM

Nice expression. There is someone I still feel this way about,too.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2002-07-11 08:19 AM

Daniel
Sometimes it can feel that way, enjoyed.

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

7 posted 2002-07-11 09:51 AM

thanks for the very well written poem and the images it evokes - Paul

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