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In The Shadow Of The Night
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In The Shadow Of The Night |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands 
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My dreams are so alive in the shadow of the night but inaccessible in the light of the new day they say… it’s always darkest before dawn… For me it feels just the opposite to start another day without you… I can hardly wait for the night again so I can dream you while you’re gone… |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your poetry is very real, Neeraja... I want your happiness for you, and yet, will we miss your poetry when you are? |
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MidnightSon Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 312between the gutter & the stars |
a clever spin on the cliche....i like doing that too. thought of elton after this one. "mona lisa's and mad hatters, sons of bankers, sons of lawyers turn around and say good morning to the night." it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown [This message has been edited by MidnightSon (07-10-2002 02:43 PM).] |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
My writing helps me to be in peace with the way my life goes, it's ok... smile... no one is always happy... happiness is just an interval between two periods of unhappiness. My poems are a connection between those periods. I will always write... I love words... and the magic beyond the words... Thank you Sunshine for your sweet words... and thank you MidnightSon for your lines of poetry... Love, Light and Happiness! Neeraja |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Neeraja, I love this, sweet friend, yes, always keep dreaming and hold your dreams close for they will come true soon for certain! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Neeraja, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I like the realness of this poem. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
well written poetry that shows us the rality of some of the night shadows - thanks - Paul |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
"so I can dream you while you're gone"-lovely, simply lovely. Nan(Pilgrim variety) |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is so beautifully expressed, Neeraja... I'm so glad that you still have your dreams and I hope they never turn into nightmares... ~ dream hugsLyra |
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