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Open Poetry #21

It's Raining

Kitty**
Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 428
Charlottesville,VA USA

0 posted 2002-07-09 11:08 PM

It's raining....I can hear it hit the metal roof
and I listen with quiet breath.
It's soothing and it seems to enclose me
in a world all of my own.
It's raining....in my heart, in my soul.
but the sounds on the roof captures
my attention. It's beautiful...
It's relaxing me and making me
thankful for the rain within,
for in spite of it I have known love
in it's truest form. But all things end
leaving something behind.
The rain will end, inside and out!
I am most thankful to have
experienced both.

If you can't make it so,
you need to let it go!

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-07-09 11:09 PM

Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2002-07-10 02:39 AM

I think you just made the temperature drop in preparation for rain. How clever is that?
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

MidnightSon
Member

since 2002-05-15

Posts 312
between the gutter & the stars

3 posted 2002-07-10 03:49 AM

is rain on the tin roof everyone's favorite hypnotic rhythm, or what?
you betcha.
and it is good to experience the drumming out and in.
great words here.

it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2002-07-10 03:51 AM

very positive way to see it all...I feel like that too sometimes, gotta know sad to know happy I guess...and at least I feel something, for which I'm grateful.

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