Open Poetry #21 |
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Little Place On Earth |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia ![]() |
Little Place On Earth Let me share my journey To being a scenic view A drive along the coast By the Indian Ocean blue Where soft white sands Stretches mile after mile View of friendly dolphins Their faces seem to smile I inhale the salty sea air View by the beach cafe Surfers riding the waves Really enjoying their day Later on we drive along Enjoying the scenic view See kookaburra in a tree Then a hopping kangaroo Between city and ocean Here my day finally ends Along the coast to home Glowing sunset descends It’s a clean modern city With sand, sea and surf A state over in the west My little place on earth Hope ©2002 |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Hope this is beautiful and before even checking to see where you are from I knew straight away that this poem was about my beloved Australia. I've never been to Perth (I've heard it is a very beautiful city) but really that kind of scenery could be anywhere in our beautiful country...thanks for sharing, this Aussie girl just loved it, especially the beautiful imagery, well done. ~HUGS~ Tracie~ ![]() Love is the life of the soul... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Hope it sounds absolutely beautiful. I think one could come there for vacation and never leave.......sigh..... well done doll!! ![]() Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thank you tracie , yes it is great being able to live close to the sea and wonderful beaches , there are some beautiful parts of Austrlia I have still yet to see , I have lived in Tasmania and had holidays in Queensland , also had a few week-ends in Melbourne Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
thanks gentle spirit , this was written as a challenge from another board when asked to describe either state , city or town where we live , Let me say there are places over in the States I would love top visit , I guess the internet makes our parts of the world seem so much closer Hope |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) Oh my gosh, I am so happy you wrote about your special home, sweet friend, I have never been to Australia but I know it must be so breathtakingly beautiful! (kiss on cheek) I love dolphins and coral reefs and I would dream of vacationing near where you live, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Hope I think we must have been on the same wave length as I wrote a poem last night about Australia. I've only been to the west one time but what I saw was truly beautiful. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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MidnightSon Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 312between the gutter & the stars |
one day i'll see this in person (and be out there riding those waves ![]() til then, i'll just put this in my library rely on the relaxing images you've given. it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown |
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