Open Poetry #21 |
A Picture Of My Father |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
[IMG][/IMG] THIS PICTURE WAS TAKEN A COUPLE OF YEARS BEFORE MY FATHER DIED AND IT IS A PICTURE I'LL ALWAYS TREASURE * * * * * I thought I'd show you a picture So that all of you could see How proud I am of my father For he meant the world to me This is the man I write of Who remains within my heart I've told you so much about him And of the love he did impart A man of few words So very gentle and kind He kept much to himself A nicer man you could not find I may never have been a writer If it wasn't for my Dad My words seem to have no ending This is not some passing fad Through the words that I write He will live on in me I see him in the sun And the moon and the sea Suetang [This message has been edited by Suetang (06-13-2002 06:21 PM).] |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A beautiful poem, Sue...but your photo disappeared. I think you can fix it if you go back and edit it. You also need a place to store your photos so that they won't disappear. Sharon (Mysteria) knows all about that stuff... Please email her. I would love to see a picture of your Dad. ~ many hugs Lyra |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Lyra Thanks for telling me but I don't know how to fix it. It's strange because when I went in just then to read your comment the picture is there so I am not sure what happened. Take care....Sue Suetang |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Hi Ladies - the picture is there and Dad is just the most warm and gentle looking man. God bless him. I love the hat and the golf club!!! Sue hon, thanks for sending this to me. I shall treasure it. Love ya, Marti |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
For some reason, I can't see the picture, Sue...maybe its my server. Could you email it to me and then I will be able to see what the subject of your lovely poem looks like. ~ smiling hugs Lyra |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sue, I am not the picture expert....But there are others who are... I cannot see it as well....All I get is a little white rectangle with a red x in the middle... A lovely write, and I am sure will be a very lovely picture of a proud Dad.... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sue, I tried to "fix" it but for some reason it keeps backtracking and I could not help you edit this... but I think I'll follow the link, just to see your Dad... the poem is wonderful! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sue A lovely and heart touched poem...wish I could see the photo too. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Aww..I would like to see..you paint him brilliant and proud..Thanks for sharing your world. Sincerely, Reg |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: Your poem is lovely and leaves an image of your father in my mind, bvut unfortunately, the picture did not appear. Sorry1 I would love to see him. I did enjoy the poem! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sue if the picture is on your computer, we wont be able to see it, it is also missing the " " at both the beginning and the end of of the code, I think thats correct, feel free anyone to correct me if am wrong..... I dont know much about UBB codes, I think they run the same as IMG SRC codes??? < img src=" http://www.whateverhere.jpeg "> you would need to remove the space after SRC and after jpeg to make it work.....make sense??? ~~~ I love the poem, it is very touching, and does indeed paint a beautiful picture..... Be well....Peace thank you for sharing this treasure... Lauren~ Its been a long road Getting from there to here Ive known a wind so cold, seen the darkest days but now the winds I feel are only winds of change [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (06-13-2002 11:56 AM).] |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all for trying to help and for your lovely comments. I am so sorry that I wasn't able to make this work so you could see my father. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sue, this is sooooooo beautifully touching, sweet friend, I too couldn't see the picture but I know he must be a wonderful angel just like you and I know his love will live on in every word you write! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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