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Kellie_Cantrell
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0 posted 2002-07-09 04:16 PM



divide me heart
upon tulips gazing
blind me from after
take me to wonderland
leave behind with decit
take your hands and lay them before me
leave me for divisions sake
lock my heart
through away the key
forget the past within my soul
rupture before me
golden solitude
break glass beneath my ears
divide my heart
upon tulips gazing
lighten the day from the dark ashen
this is the division
that seperates me
from heart and soul

© Copyright 2002 Kellie M. Cantrell - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-07-09 04:17 PM


Serious stuff here.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Larry C
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2 posted 2002-07-09 09:47 PM


Kellie,
Are you sure? I wonder...

Show you care to those you love...today.

Kellie_Cantrell
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3 posted 2002-07-09 10:09 PM


hey, this poem isn't about me. It isn't how I feel. This poem tells that some people have it so hard and just weant to lock ther feelings up inside thats not me.
Larry C
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4 posted 2002-07-11 03:01 AM


Kellie,
It's not illegal to write about others and their experience. So is it illegal to misinterprete? Love ya'.

Show you care to those you love...today.

Kellie_Cantrell
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5 posted 2002-07-11 04:09 AM


no larry its not
Sudhir Iyer
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6 posted 2002-07-11 08:27 AM


this is very well written... I think this is the first I have read from you ... and this goes to tell me about the great stuff I have been missing...

Hope to catch up soon...

Regards,
sudhir

Madame Chipmunk
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7 posted 2002-07-11 08:46 PM


this is a spectacular piece of writing, Kellie...
I enjoyed it from start to finish...
~ hugs and smiles

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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