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anserine in blanco
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anserine in blanco |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I own but the minute of this flicker dim display that plays for hours in rewind wound as metier with artful sincerity and the ending is the first scene again this savanna of celluloid argy-barge would I solicit it for those eternal instants in minute rice water without pretending thrummed like a dozen heartbeat monotones drum hum, strummed rhythm rum'd sipped with guzzle grunting glower row I beg to ameliorate my improvement now but with godless amending my efforts at best are only the better break of spoiled less and my punter pole will not have the length to journey this tall ship of my wish boat reach to the stargaze aspirations in daydreams reek.. and on the dawn of my imbecility, shall I teach? ©Dark |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger You write like a black swan rather than a anserine in blanco. Enjoyed |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
loner thanks for that awesome..much appreciated sy, thanks me amigo...am proud to have your reviews |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS You take me to confusion door and lead me by the word..it is a remarkable place. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your poems always have an incredible word usage and a mysterious tone to it unlike any other, sweet friend, this is excellent, I love it, we all love you so much, YAY!!!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
I own nothing but the beat of my heart which lost a thump or two in this read... well done, Poet... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie... lol confused? just playin with some psych stuff..you know how they say to get your "stuff together".. just a vision of how funny it is for the person that messes it up to try to fix it too...then to help others with their mess also.. friend noah, thanks sir for your review and comments, glad the words were fun. elan, ms it is grand to have you celebrate my sillysack with your read. Thanks ms |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Awwww....now I understand! and on the dawn of my imbecility, shall I teach? |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
and on the dawn of my imbecility, shall I teach? I am late for class Professor Dark. Your art compels..word search frenzy. Perhaps a few feathers in my velvet purse..will only tickle. Hug you hard. Sincerely, Reg |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
reg... thanks for the hugs babe..you may have to stay after since you were late (grin) was just playin in the big book some |
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