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Melancholia
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Melancholia |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Melancholia Melancholia slides in stain As rain glides down the windowpane And I a clown in frowning face Borrowed from my inner space. I sent my mind to touch the drops To dance among the lops and plops And twirled as if I were a kite Shedding rain drops with delight. And then I saw a rainbows path In the showers of the bath And flew into its downward glide To see what treasure it did hid And I awoke my living room Holding fast the curtains loom Smiling at the running pane Laughing at the driving rain Happiness hides in your dwell Bides within your wishing well. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
well penned sir sy this one is a concert of contrast |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Ahhh the master poet...another fine delight  Wonderfully penned sweet Sy ~hugs~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling heart and writer extraordinaire this is exceptionally beautiful, your gift with words is a constant inspiration to a soul too long denied love’s light. Beautiful writing utterly utterly beautiful, I love it utterly. The way you spin words into wonder is always perfect and sometimes on days when the day seems particularly drab you are a positive shower of light and magic. Wonderful writing. It flows beautifully across the page like a sweep of rainbow hue. Thank you Seymour for this all I can say is that’ll do nicely love x x As always Mushy    Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Raindrops are sliding down my window pane as well this morning, Sy. Good weather for writing....this is wonderful! ~Morning Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger Well said, thank you. tracie66 Marsha Missed you my lovely utterly. Enchantress, Good morning and hugs back. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Melancholia slides in stain could that image be any cooler? and Sybabers...if you tear down Isabels drapes..your gonna catch hell!! LOL You dont want Randy to get in the dog house and miss Cancun do you?  This was a rainyday delight Stinkylove... its just like you to find us the silver lining in the shades of gray....send some of your rain to me and Martie...we are tired of dragging hoses around. LOL  Now for me some words come easy |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Ah, a slow dance mine in rondo time in mirrored shine of saddened mime a bit of glee 'twould have you see if only the clown would grin merrily... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
well penned,sir |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy Sliding down rainbows is not an easy thing to do takes a child's eyes and laughter glue Loved this poem! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Everything has some sort of silver lining and would be glad to send the rain if I could WWRS Soleil Noir Delightful poetic answer. Vandana, Thank you dear. Martie, Childs eyes and laughers glue, How did you know. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, Sy, I love reading your thoughts here!!! Makes me feel like a kid again!! Thank you for the pleasure!! Open the door and let your adventure begin!!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunnyone Thank you for the bump and read. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A delightful poem, Sy... Its raining here this morning, which sets the perfect tone for reading your poem. Last night we finally had a thunderstorm. I hadn't seen one in a while, and I must say that it was quite enjoyable... The lightning bolts seemed to come through the skylights and touch the livingroom floor. I love the rain and I love your poem.  ~ rainy day hugsLyra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lyra, Glad you enjoyed the rain and thanks for the rainy day hugs. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well, mine must be hiding very good from me. I am still looking. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing shadows Thanks for the read. There are so many postings that one entry quickly falls under the onslaught of the others. |
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