Open Poetry #21 |
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Fill 'Er Up |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Fill 'Er Up By: Noah Eaton 7/8/02 Cruising down Interstate 55, down the county line All tied up in daydreams, twenty questions and tomorrows sights That long game of I Spy made me feel half-crucified Not to mention all the license plates of states I couldn't find Otherwise I'm feeling just fine I lose against my sisters every time in that Quiet Game Yet these are the days you just have to rise and celebrate Like The Boss says, we're all born to run So you've got to be chasing down the sun So fill 'er up Fill 'er up Fill her 'up Stopped in at the Cracker Barrel Saturday morning Browsing around that country store before we sat down to eat Sitting out on the rocking chairs on the patio Playing around with the Slinky, jumble checkers and yo-yo Making funny faces with that Wooly Willy as we played with that Whee-lo Just for fun, we threw around the Balsa Glider Nurtured that Cheerful Chimp and strummed the guitar of Roy Rogers Played tea party with Raggedy Ann and Andy Settling for one small game of them their Tiddley-Winks Sat down for dinner for some fresh cajun catfish Grilled with tasty steak fries, pinto beans, and turnips Celebrating another victory in pegs over a glass of sorghum molasses Every now and then you've go to try Uncle Herschel's favorite Take the time and enjoy life's unique ingredients So fill 'er up Fill 'er up Fill 'er up So maybe I can't drive 55 like Sammy Hager But I can roar like Steppenwolf, that's for sure Are you gonna go my way for some downhome goodness? Get out the map and let's point our finger upon our destination Out here in the free world we can be anything Makes no difference to be nothing or everything Let your life take command in scenic route mode and speed You can be the king or queen, if you know what I mean So saddle up partner, we're in cruise control The summer is passing so soon, so we gotta roll So fill 'er up Fill 'er up Fill 'er up "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (07-08-2002 06:55 PM).] |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
You really got me in the mood for travel, Noah... It sounds like you had a wonderful time and turned it into a fantastic poem. ![]() hugs from that grandma tramp poet on the Harley Lyra |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I like to travel. I enjoyed this. ![]() Cold hands means a warm heart |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Just cruising down the country road, you have such vivid images to share. Sandra |
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paladin![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
If you stay on the road long enough.You become the road. paladin |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
Oh yeah! The beat goes on! Jack K would have been proud. Very nicely done Noah, very nicely done indeed. Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
What a wonderful, good old days feel this has, Noah! Great work on this! Cor |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Noah, this is just beautiful LOL by the title I imidiatly thought of large pints of beer ![]() ![]() Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
good write noah....liked this one |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed ![]() |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
there aint nothing like country cruisin Noah. Ahhh Sammy.... I have the same problem he does......lol..... I cant do that 55 thing either....... Hugs.....great write. Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
do you know the laugh of knowing? it is deeply felt, also and a joy to let out! toasting to days of riding backwards in the rumbleseat of a station wagon on the way to anywhere i admire your versatility and your great sense of humor, Noah, jeff |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Noah, I read this one earlier, and I didn't quite know what to say, still don't, but I wanted to let you know that it touched me...and after i read it, I did fill er up and I went on a drive to see an old friend...and I"m glad I did. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Aww I just loved that route, thanks for the ride...enjoyed!!! ~hugs~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice trip Noah...you must have lots of money if you can afford to fill er up...James |
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