Open Poetry #21 |
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Unpassing Perplexity |
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Masked Intruder![]() ![]()
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Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets ![]() |
I'm dying in sighing heart-wrenching breaths of flutter petaled pink carnations and light sprinklings of babywhite aster, imagining every love locked look that privately passes from your sweet blue eyes to find his, horrid him, he who holds your hand, five fragile fingers that only I should trace. Your face, soft in smile, with sparkling eyes, instills my cries in still echoes within my mind. I cannot with any ease cast adrift the pleas of my hungry heart. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
imagining every love locked look that privately passes from your sweet blue eyes to find his, horrid him, he who holds your hand, five fragile fingers that only I should trace. Your face, soft in smile, with sparkling eyes, instills my cries Damn, I like this! I’ll go to puppy class…if you’ll go to cooking class |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
ouch. This is an apt and yet beautiful description of a very painful situation. I think you just broke MY heart. |
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KillerLemurGirl New Member
since 2002-08-10
Posts 2 |
To have the starving occipital feed upon your words Words that were meant to remain blind to these blue eyes You say I am only hurting myself but I am also hurting everyone else, I am the masochist and sadist of emotion, You said that you never liked to lie, But you also never said anything to me about beauty, Is any beauty I have a lie then? I still love you more than I should and I'm working on it but my emotional wrist will not be drained of its life. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Where are you these days, Sweet Intruder? Misting ya. ![]() Hope things are better than they were when you wrote this poem. ![]() "two hearts will build the foundation for one point of light |
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