Open Poetry #21 |
Dusk to Dawn |
Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Dark night stared upon the sand To blacken all it's grains Quiet stars began to shine Thus, our beach sustains A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Love the beach so therefore I love this poem. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
Gives me wonderful imagery of a romantic beach under a starlit sky... Lovely! ~mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Nice imagery, enjoyed much! |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Fantastic piece! Kris, I love your style. Glad I stumbled upon your pieces. Looking forward to more, and more, and... LoL. ~Titus As I'm out there, walking, searching, for myself, for you.... won't you join me? Let's walk this journey together. |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Wonderful imagery you have used here *applauds* Andrew "Pretend inferiority and encourage his arrogance." |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Beautiful words and images. Take care....Sue I am in motion |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
thanks for the images in this poetry - well written - Paul |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Krishankins Good one enjoyed. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
The beach at sunset is ALWAYS my fav... loved the whole scene of this Kris~~~ *hugs* Tanya Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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