Open Poetry #21 |
My Star |
Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA |
Once you were my bright shinning star, you lit up the world for me. No such thing as darkness invading, Your illumination didn't allow it to be. My inner soul was finally at peace, I could laugh at hard times at my door. I knew I could make it, no matter what. I had a whole new world to explore. I looked forward to times I would see you, for a while I thought you felt the same way. For some reason things started changing, You seemed to have less to me to say. My bright shining star was dimming. I will never know the reason why. I could only stand by just waiting and Silently praying that it wouldn't die. Each week, each month, it slowly faded. I watched with a tear in my eye. I had to accept, that soon it would be gone, I couldn't stop it. I didn't want it to die. Now I know the meaning of darkness, And this void of emptiness I feel. My star has diminished, the glow has winked out, Now I wonder: Were you ever real....? If you can't make it so, you need to let it go! [This message has been edited by Kitty** (07-08-2002 07:50 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) This is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I wish for the stars to again shine in your skies soon! (sigh) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much, keep on wishing for the best! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Aww I know just how you feel, for many stars faded out on me too! Don't worry, a brighter, ever-lasting star will come to you very soon! |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Been there. Done that. Good write. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
A very sad write, but wonderfully done! Michael |
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