Open Poetry #21 |
Pain's End |
ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
She had gone so far away; I just wanted her to stay. She had to go and live her life, I had to stand strong and wield my knife. The pain was strong, my end I'd meet. I stood and waited for defeat. Just then she returned, my strength restored, And I finally struck, a victory scored. My power now at twice its norm, I saw my evil taking form. But when it came it found surprise, For my courage had tripled in size! So always remember when evil causes a fight, Look to love and then take flight. Love will guide you and add to your power, Even in your darkest hour. It gives you light in times so black, A shield to block each dark attack. So just remember what comes from above, And enhance your life and strength with love. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
That is beautiful. *hugs* Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
So are you. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
You so sweet. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
So are you. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Bumping this up because this is some good poetry here. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
Thanks Julie. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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Furie Junior Member
since 2002-06-17
Posts 39Myriad of Unkown Places |
Yay! Excellent poem and message. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
I really enjoyed the intensity that I felt in your words here. Love really does give you power.....thanks for this read!! Open the door and let your adventure begin!!! |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
No problem. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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