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Blackdrake Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 83Depends on the day :) |
I dreamt once of a place Id love to take you For you seem to need a place To live and be at peace A beach of plain old sand Outlining a waterfall of pearl With pale blue water Falling in a curl Here you would have no worries No cares to worry on Just plain old sand With a chair to tan on . I would never presume to tell you Why it is that I care so much Because I could never find the words To explain my mind thus Please never forget that I love you For you will always be part of my heart The part I will be lost in the mist without. Mysterious is the shadow, walking down the path of light. ~~ ¥ ~~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dang! This is beautiful! Lead the way...this place sounds heavenly! I don't believe I have read your writing before... but I shall be looking for it now!!  ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautifully written my friend. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) This is a beautifully bittersweet poem, sweet friend, I wish for loves true bliss to be remembered time and time again to you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Blackdrake, thank you for sharing!  May love and light awlays shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
oooohhhh I totally love this poem. The special person u wrote it for will adore it too |
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