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RSWells
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since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

0 posted 2002-07-07 11:33 AM

The courting reporter
read it back to me
and it is there;
She called me Baby!

It came out quick,
with ease
between the wine
and bries
my hungry ears it pleased,
She called me Baby!

My doe heart
froze in light,
my grey hair
stood upright,
my hope roared
fahrenheit,
She called me Baby!

The little bird
whose trill
my stomach heard
and thrilled
an emptiness
was killed,
when She said Baby!

And it not once
but thrice,
my mind wept
Edelweiss,
sweet bird of paradise
had called me Baby!

When we rose
from her bed
in throes
of passion's fed
(though Love was
never said)
She called me Baby!

What should I
make of this
sweet mouth
I long to kiss?
(and somewhat south
of this)
or was it maybe?

Now there's
an echo here
(and too a
timid fear)
again please
whisper Dear
that I'm your Baby

"Happy people have no history" - French Proverb

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-07-07 11:44 AM

I don't know what inspire
brought this to your ear
but I'm glad your baby
called you dear...

This was charming! We have missed you!

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2002-07-07 11:49 AM

Richard

I loved this...your excitement explodes off the page..with a bit of the sweet innocence of new love. Best wishes!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-07-07 01:25 PM

OHMYGOSH! Mr Wells!
You sound as though you may explode with joy!!
I don't know what has happened to you...
but it looks good on ya baby!
Excellent write!!
Love this side of you!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

4 posted 2002-07-07 01:32 PM

This is great! Brought just the smile I needed.

New sig in construction. Please maintain speed limit.

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

5 posted 2002-07-07 01:34 PM

i loveeeeeeeeeeeeee this...i always love everything you write poet sir...and to see you romantic and playful is wonderful...helen

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

6 posted 2002-07-07 03:16 PM

It sounds as if you have a great reason to be so elated but I do have ONE ? If you were jumping from the throes of bed ... where the heck was the courting reporter to have recorded all of this?????? NEVER MIND!!! I think that best be left alone. :! Wonderful write. The flow was flawless and the presentation had a very inticing quality about it. I very much enjoyed and NO ..... I ain't gonna touch that "south" line.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2002-07-07 04:30 PM

Like this...reminded me of the song..."She called me baby, baby all night long"...James

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

8 posted 2002-07-07 04:31 PM

So reminds me of Liam when I call him my snugglebunny.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

9 posted 2002-07-07 04:34 PM

Your smile is showing! Enjoyed this.

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

10 posted 2002-07-08 03:41 AM

This was such a fun read! It's always nice when someone you care about, or want to care about, calls you a cuddly name...too often in life, we are called the other names!! Enjoyed this too!!

Open the door and let your adventure begin!!!

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

11 posted 2002-07-08 07:33 PM

this is wonderful and incredible. I am so glad she called you baby, it is great to see this side of you, and it is great to see you back!

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

12 posted 2002-07-08 07:44 PM

HA HA HA !
Funny stuff !
Much enjoyed !
-----
But if my grey hair
stood thus upright
my-o-my
I would be a fright
-----
Thanks for the smiles.

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