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Pagoda Walk |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Do the shake rattle roll do the pagoda afternoon stroll walk by lioness fountains in rows trip by parasoled ladies in stoles Another venue in another life another headframe of enchanted light follower pokes through the celestial bubble communicates with others to avoid trouble Looks along tree-lined avenues another life another venue decision makers sail seven seas in that blue bubble..what a tease. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (07-10-2002 08:21 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ecrivan A delight of a write, enjoyed the read. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I very much enjoyed reading this Cold hands means a warm heart |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
This a very interesting read, and refreshing too! ~mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Sy, visions of parasoled ladies at a lake, like in a Seurat painting ...my means of escaping the heat my cafe, just exercising that mechanism of coping with the summer heat...yes it's refreshing loner23 glad you liked this... alright. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (07-09-2002 01:33 AM).] |
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