Open Poetry #21 |
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In Lucid Dreams |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
In lucid dreams you are like a vision beyond light like a wolf's serenade to the moon everything seems so right If I could show you as you come to me unadorned if my dream were true I'd welcome you with open arms Forever dreamin as I lay my head upon my hands my lovely nightly vision disappears like shifting grains of sand We are like dancing shadows that get together every night frolicing warily around until mornings first light. Garfield |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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paladin![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Lucid dreams are like "E" ticket rides at Disney world. paladin |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
don't you just love it when a dream comes together? I do, just as I love this piece, with its superb language. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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RosePetal![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I like this....back to the top it goes ![]() |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) Oh Garfield, I love this, sweet friend, may you always be serenaded by the wolf of your dreams, sweet friend, this is enchanting, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Garfield, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Thank you all for your wonderful comments. Garfield |
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