Open Poetry #21 |
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Gleam of light |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Gleam of light . Rays of light shine forth from the sky, Pocking through the dark and the gloom, The rays of light are in my eye, Suddenly everything’s in bloom; Rose petals like your cherry lips, Birds sing so sweetly like your speech, My heart is doing turns and flips, This beauty love to me does teach; So when I gaze out at nature, And see your face just smiling back, I realize I have found a cure, For all the thing’s I lack; Rays of light shine forth from the sky, The twinkle in your endless eye . Written by Tom Baker .© [This message has been edited by angelswing (07-07-2002 10:40 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Krishankins![]()
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Nice one! very joyful! ![]() Krishankins A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
Not only beautiful, but amazing imagery.. an enchanting tale of wonderous feelings. These things are what I dream of for myself one day... bethann What is past is prologue; |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A beautiful tribute to a fine lady, Tom. Isn't Mom Nature wonderful. ![]() Lyra |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) This is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, and may you always hold your angel close to your heart and share true happiness with her always! (sigh) This is beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tom, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy ![]() |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Thank you all, you are so kind with your words ... The truth is that unfortunatly I can only dream of a love like this; something I have experienced once or twice but probably never again . I wanted to write a sonnet which is how I came to structure the poem like this, but in the end I realsised that my poetry has always been short line poetry so I stuck on 7 syllables a line instead of 10 . As ever your replies are over wealmingly beautiful; thanks . L.of.L. Tom . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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