Open Poetry #21 |
Unexpected Journey |
Daylily Junior Member
since 2002-06-10
Posts 22USA |
Unexpected Journey One day I walked along the dock Admiring the world at play, When out of nowhere came a dark ship And pirated me away. On this ship there was no peace, No laughter, joy, or light. So I sat down in despair To contemplate my plight. I could not eat, I could not sleep, My life was filled with tears. I felt myself fading away, The days, they seemed like years. I realized this journey Was not one I’d planned to take, Whoever booked me on this cruise Had made a terrible mistake. I struggled so just to survive, It all seemed so glum, Then I knew just what I’d do, I’d go back the way I’d come. I set my sail to take me home, And hurried toward the shore. If I could just set foot on land, I’d sail away no more. Then one morning I looked out To a wondrous sight. The sun was pushing through the clouds Sending me new light. Now I had a feeling I’d not known since I’d begun. For with that ray of sunshine, I knew the battle I had won. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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EarthenSoul Member
since 2002-05-30
Posts 163WA, USA |
Great Write! Very inspirational! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
YES! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Good for you, Egan! Very nice poem too ~ poetic hugs Lyra |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
yes. . . light will always shine. . . great work. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
May your light shine more brightly every day! Excellent job! Cindi |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
EXCELLENT!! ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Pam! All the responses here are from friends of mine. And cpalmer and I attend the same church. This is an excellent poem. Please write and post some more. You got great responses here. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*smiling* interesting write! |
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