Open Poetry #21 |
Rememberings of the Future |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Rememberings of the Future I have missed the moments of you, words that touch my lips to yours. I count the seconds lost, to be shared only in the mind, one that harbors the past rememberings of the future. I walk the shadows softly lit with shades of you pulled tightly 'round me, blocking all else leaving me hopeful, that I am in the holdings of your mind unfolding slowly as you close the distance between us. Tomorrow is a day of knew, words of strength grow in me as I contemplate you through a clouded mind, wondering why and if and would you if you could. Every time I close my eyes, your face appears, the racing of your heart transfers to mine and I rise to the occasion borne of a love that sustains even in the darkest hours. Without you, I am not empty nor lonely, for I have the memories, the feelings of desire that keep me protected from the sorrows that encroach upon and frustrate my soul. I love you, spoken by I, maybe not enough but often seen in hazel eyes known by the blue of yours, to secure our fate. You deserve more than shades of gray, color added to the black of your night and white of your days, if only you could learn to allow the hues to brush up against you... I give to you my love, my support, my heart, in words always, in touch upon real, in looks from deep within, in tears that flow sacred as thoughts slip away in moments of tranquility. Let me touch your heart, that which you have fenced in, protecting you from my reach, a friendship embossed in forever, a dream in the making, no longer hidden, but ready to ride any storm, mend any tears... blend away the pain of life. What else is there to say, how must one prove their love, show their faith, cradle their words to calm the fears that cycle the nights waiting to share? Romance is waiting, my existence infected by a reign of deliverance, your soul mysting into mine. I am within your grasp, stranded in wait ...but for how long? M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
You deserve more than shades of gray, color added to the black of your night and white of your days, if only you could learn to allow the hues to brush up against you... Beautiful writing, Maureen... ~ hugs of many colors Lyra |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautifully written Cold hands means a warm heart |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
It's nice to read you again, Maureen. I like yr words. She said burn ... together. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Maureen darling heart how utterly utterly perfect is this, words soft and soothing flow over my soul from your pen. How beautifully you write, how clear the images are, and how special is your writing? I can only say this is perfect, truly beautiful writing and you are incredible. Didn’t I tell you that this was utterly utterly wonderful writing? It is keep it up and you deserve to be crowned queen of someone’s heart, and not to have to wait until the never-when Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Romance is waiting, my existence infected by a reign of deliverance, your soul mysting into mine. I am within your grasp, stranded in wait ...but for how long?" (smiles) Oh Maureen, this is soooooo beautifully touching, sweet friend, may that awaiting romance come your way and deluver you into pure bliss forever, sweet friend, this is dazzling, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
So much emotions in here as I read your poetry. Enjoyed... ~mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Beautiful. I hope it's not too long. Sandra |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Lyra, sometimes the stubborness of my words just pours out...brushing up against you..hope it doesn't leave any stains. *s tl_23 Thank you and welcome..and I have cold hands too..and an exceptionally warm heart *s M |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
bsquirrel..always happy to see you here Mike...you seem happy, and I am happy for you M Marsha...hi there, sweet friend...I felt a bit better tonight and thought I would try to catch up on my responses....thank you for yours. hugss M p.s. I don't think I will ever be crowned a queen of anything..but thank you for the kind words. Noah..you are too kind *s thank you M |
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