Open Poetry #21 |
Primal Passions |
Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
Wants and needs beyond all reason Thoughts and feelings intermingle Hot or cold demands the season As all senses thrum and tingle Eyes, first wide, then closed in passions A full-bodied sun is setting Light submits to darker rations Primal appetites are whetting Lunge and plunge after the treasure Pure lust hunting a fresh reward Seeking, searching out the pleasure O, put heart's conscience to the sword Friend or foe, no longer waiting For the kill or for the mating. Love, |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You surely described the primal instinct very well |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Eyes, first wide, then closed in passions A full-bodied sun is setting Light submits to darker rations Primal appetites are whetting A beautiful raw feeling of sensuality in these lines, Bonnie... I really loved the whole poem. ~ poetic hugs Lyra |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Very well written. 2 thumps up. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The drive is wide open! Well done. ThisDiamond |
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my3monkeytoes Member
since 2002-05-11
Posts 152In the Carolina Breeze |
...for the kill, or for the mating... Yep, that pretty much sums it up. I liked this! ~Sydney McLean |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Wow, this is powerful, sweet friend, I too love the powerful passion you incoroporate into this, this is excellent, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bonnie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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