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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2002-06-27 06:49 AM


wear for me the vine laces
woman of willow skin
drift me to your grotto sigh fabric
let my mind be a centaur there

beckon the fauns of bacchus
with your siren sound songs
bless me with title then
of sommelier of your sauvignon

we shall be seamless dreams
and seque into some tomorrow sky
that opens her arms with bare glass dawn
and bosom warm for lovers pressed faces

we will be wilderness plummets of crystalline


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-06-27 06:55 AM



Gads, what a Raphaelian picture you have painted...do it again!

serenity blaze
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2 posted 2002-06-27 06:56 AM


so much magick abounding here this morning...

you leave me enchanted!

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2002-06-27 06:59 AM


wear for me the vine laces
woman of willow skin
drift me to your grotto sigh fabric
let my mind be a centaur there

Ds has arrived....
Good mornin Dark.  *s*

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}


Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2002-06-27 06:59 AM


Sunshine, Good Morning lady...(toasting with a starbucks running out the door) Thanks for the sweet wave of your eyes.

Serene1, my blessing and pleasure to enchant one so enchanting, thanks hon

GS, Good Morning ms Donna, slow hugs and thanks for the soft of your voice touch

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (06-27-2002 07:01 AM).]

rwood
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5 posted 2002-06-27 07:26 AM


Oh my gosh...I do believe you are Dionysus..pour us another darling..big glass..WRITE..please..

Sincerely,
Reg

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2002-06-27 07:36 AM


Regina, gotta jumbo tommy tippy if ya want?  so pleased to wriggle your cravy ms, thanks
Toerag
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7 posted 2002-06-27 07:59 AM


I think I've snorted some of that before?...interesting poem with some great diction....
Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2002-06-27 08:17 AM


Dark Stranger
She eyes the sparkle of three carrots while the donkey heaves and stretches his neck.

Martie
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9 posted 2002-06-27 09:46 AM


Good Morning, DS

The fabric you write on is made of silk, your pen dipped in songbird's dictionary.

Anvrill
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in the interzone now
10 posted 2002-06-27 10:19 AM


Very awesome. Though I suppose the mentioning of Bacchus had me biased from then on in.

"Sooner or later, they'll never grow up." -Jim Steinman (unreleased and almost completely unheard, but hey)

Corinne
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state of confusion
11 posted 2002-06-27 02:14 PM


Beautiful, D. A softer side, woven with mysteries and myths of olde.

Cor

Janet Marie
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12 posted 2002-06-27 02:33 PM


beckon the fauns of bacchus
with your siren sound songs
bless me with title then
of sommelier of your sauvignon


we shall be seamless dreams
and seque into some tomorrow sky
that opens her arms with bare glass dawn
and bosom warm for lovers pressed faces
==============================
looking up words in the dictionary was NEVER this sexy back in school ROFL

AWESOME write of theme, vocab and imagery DS
you take words and make them slow burn...
I'll admit to inhaling. LOL

When your own emptiness is all thats getting through,
There comes a point when youre not sure why youre still talking,
I passed that point long ago.

Mistletoe Angel
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13 posted 2002-06-27 07:58 PM




BRAVO!!! Yes, yes, I too truly think you are Dionysus, may your heart always flow with loves wine and may you always dance in the gardens and meadows and have dreams splashed in Van Gogh pastels! (big hugggssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

catalinamoon
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14 posted 2002-06-27 09:27 PM


Sigh, l would like to jump right into this poem.
Sandra

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