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Breathing |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Breathing you are so different when you are adored doors just fly open that once were ignored stumbling first then walked now I run someone adores me my breath has begun |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Love this one!! You just captured a subject that has gone unnoticed until now...breathing! So vital to our very souls, but taking on so many different methods. Great, great job!! My compliments! Open the door and let your adventure begin!!! [This message has been edited by Sunnyone (07-07-2002 04:45 AM).] |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
I see some things never change. Lovely Helen. Kris A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You wrote "adore" so well... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, I too love how you express the meaning of the word in this, sweet friend, to advance, to feel free, to float! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light awlays shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Love the meaning in this one. How true it is. |
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