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I Have Eyes |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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A pair of lenses that I use to focus spot rare earth samples, pick a crocus notice some ice melting off the roof glint at new channel sit-coms, spoofs. I keep a mind's eye to see beyond table talk to see tomorrow before today's night has struck focus those lenses on new perspectives away from Titian's nudes onto abstract collectives... Eyes continue to flicker in the night albino ones have zero pigment, alright they stare down to avoid direct contact look unfliched as they face new contracts myriad pairs of eyes with noctural vision would sleep by day, and hunt at night with decision of the celestial eye that governs us all does it watch amused when we reach downfalls? [This message has been edited by ecrivan (07-07-2002 08:38 AM).] |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
keeping this up there if I can  I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
That we be nice to continue having this one read. Good weekend to you  |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Hey, you wanted it keeping up, I can do that; Loved the poem - especially the predatory last verse ... excellent . Thanks . L.of.L. Tom . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I see! Very well done. What a compliment to the blue to have your touch of vision. ThisDiamond |
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cherrypoptart Member
since 2002-06-09
Posts 109state of wordthiness |
Very good writing! Good introduction. A pair of lenses that I use to focus spot rare earth samples, pick a crocus notice some ice melting off the roof glint at new channel sit-coms, spoofs. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Thanks Tom Diamond and Cherrypop for keeping this up...guess I see humanity being squeezed under predatory talons. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (07-08-2002 10:21 AM).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
ecrivan- There is always so much depth to your writing and this piece is no exception. I enjoyed this. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A fresh and innovative look at vision... I really enjoyed this one, very much, Martin.  ~ hugs lookin at yaLyra |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Here's lookin at all of you..hehe..Thanks for staring, I mean sharing  |
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