The Strangest Feeling ( a tweaked Triolet)

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Open Poetry #21

The Strangest Feeling ( a tweaked Triolet)

Morcastlin
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since 2002-01-14

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The Jersey Shore, USA

0 posted 2002-07-06 08:21 PM

Love is quite the strangest feeling
Reason's notions ebb and flow
Tender touches send you reeling
Love is quite the strangest feeling
Yet, as if a thief that's stealing
Mental oceans cease or slow
Love is quite the strangest feeling
Reason's notions ebb and flow.

*Tweaked because I used my own meter. Not sure if there is a standard for the form.

Love,
Bonnie

"I want to Live! Life is a banquet and most poor bastards are starving to death!" -Auntie Mame

Krishankins

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since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

1 posted 2002-07-06 09:32 PM

No matter the standard..I still like it!

Kris

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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-07-06 10:33 PM

Leaves a tingling...

I like, I Like!

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

3 posted 2002-07-06 11:28 PM

Oh, I like this one. Triolets are nice, and this one is excellent. I don't think there's any rule about meter.

Nan

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2002-07-06 11:36 PM

A beautiful sweep! Nicely done. ThisDiamond

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-07-07 05:31 PM

(smiles) Oh Bonnie, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I too don't care about meter much and I love this gorgeous gem you've crafted! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, Yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bonnie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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