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Puddles |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Puddles what is it i can say to you i have said so much and yet nothing at all i have so much to tell you to share all in letters said can i say you are the rain gentle and loving on my skin enriching and washing me clean making my clothes cling to me exposing me underneath pouring emotions till i run and melt me in puddles |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
great images here, I remember a time like that. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
you are the rain gentle and loving on my skin enriching and washing me clean I really like the above lines! Good write! |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
I love the way you composed those words... |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
WHEW! I need some rain here to cool me off! Can you pour a drop or two on me? Nice one! Krish A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Helen, Sounds like a Kodak moment to me!  Show you care to those you love...today. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this is a refreshing and touching poem raining with desire! (kiss on cheek) This is a true keeper, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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