Open Poetry #21 |
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To Acquiesce |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I miss the connection but you've had objections you're so hard to read & I've tired of "try" I thought we were okay & now it's like, "no way!" you hereby are freed I'm sure you know why... because I don't... ~Tier 7/02 "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Quit reading my journal.... hugging you for this... |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Didn't I tell you that I can read those whom I care about? *wink* *big hugs back* ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
you hereby are freed I'm sure you know why... because I don't... Yep, been exactly there. The confidence, the confusion, the resolve not to need to know. Forgetting all I'm lacking |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I need to learn how to "let go" like this-- (both in writing and relationships--grin) The last line sealed it. Wonderful. |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Wow.... Tier...this is so clear....and so very well expressed...How true it is as well...If only we could read thoughts, maybe it is best that we cannot... |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I like this it made me remember a situation we were talking about this and that, about nothing, really, and she got angry. she got angrier and angrier, and I could not understand why, and she could explain it in any way that made sense to me. that moment remains puzzling to this day. So, thanks, ~wranx "Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do...provided it's done in private and you wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big huggssssssss) This is so very sad, sweet friend, I know this feeling and too wish I knedw what others were thinking so I can satisfy their needs! (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tiersdin, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Wow, the things you say in two short verses. Great ending, I've never read better. Nan |
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