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The Lace Of You
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The Lace Of You |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Slip the lace of you over all that I am For, in the silkiness of your touch in the heat of your embrace I am whole Burn with me as does the flame of hottest passion melting the wax of a heart into the flow of liquid sin Trace my soul with your own as you line me with the tips of feathers bound lightly with silk until I, until we... explode in the heavens as stars fall upon our earth’s bed into the twilight of love and slumber.... smiling in an endless dream of hot nights and cool tights |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Slip the lace of you over all that I am For, in the silkiness of your touch in the heat of your embrace I am whole aahhh yeah, absolutely lovely Barry. Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry Lovely passion in this laced and feathered poem. Enjoyed! |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
this scene takes my breath away adored this I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lace is always interesting...James |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Soft...sensuous....sultry.... summer songs.... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
some wonderful lines in here Barry...especially the first: Slip the lace of you over all that I am I loved that one. hugs M |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Now THAT'S what I'm talkin' about! yummy.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oooooh yesss.... Hot nights.... A little lace..... And White Shoulders.  |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
OMG...you just melted me...helen |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, Now you did it. You pressed every button in passions. Excellent. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
As sensual a write as ever done. Shivers. ThisDiamond |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Oh what a silky, summery sensuous poem, Barry....and I loved the lace too... ~ lacey hugsLyra |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
this leaves me speechless....ummmm what a romantic!  Lauren~ The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
wonderfully passionate!! ~mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo sensually beautiful, sweet friend, your words always flow like silk and lace across these pages with such sighs and romance! (sigh) This is soooooo romantic, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I'm a single lady. I have to remind myself not to read your poetry anymore. Much too yummy, you know, for a single lady that wants to stay that way. Nan |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Well, there you go again, instigating all the sighs. Sandra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
One more time!! *SIGH* |
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