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RSWells
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since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

0 posted 2002-07-06 12:35 PM

For T

I tried not to write
this poem of longing
in this two step forward
one step back affair,
my fear you'd take flight
asked if we're belonging,
an advance untoward
(how's man say he care's?)

Somewhere in between
reality, reflection,
is a hazy illusion
or perhaps it's us,
your moon's light I glean
silv'ry bits of affection,
then my warm front's occlusion
cooled by clouded muss

My sun won't stay hidden
it's rays rain a golden gift
that just one troubled planet
weakly would seek to screen,
it's warmth you are bidden
brown eyes I beg you uplift,
there was no way to plan it
please look, see what it means

"Happy people have no history" - French Proverb

[This message has been edited by RSWells (07-06-2002 10:36 AM).]

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

1 posted 2002-07-06 03:39 AM

all I have to say is..
WHERE THE HECK HAVE YOU BEEN? I'VE MISSED DROOLING OVER POETRY LIKE THIS!!
err..

enjoyed the poem?

Missing ya presence, Sir.

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

2 posted 2002-07-06 03:51 AM

good one!

Nothing means more to me than faith,
family and my friends.

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-07-06 07:14 AM

quote:
My sun won't stay hidden
it's rays rain a golden gift...

it's warmth you are bidden...

there was no way to plan it
please look, see what it means...

Aye, m'boy...we've Missed You....

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2002-07-07 03:20 PM

My sun won't stay hidden
it's rays rain a golden gift
that just one troubled planet
weakly would seek to screen,
it's warmth you are bidden
brown eyes I beg you uplift,
there was no way to plan it
please look, see what it means
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Well since Im not "T" I wont drool LOL...
but I will tell you this is lovely...the rhyme and the emotional expression.
A beautiful write of heart.
well done post sir.
jm

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

5 posted 2002-07-07 03:21 PM

Awesome.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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