Open Poetry #21 |
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An Afternoon |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace ![]() |
An Afternoon I will make a bed of clover just for you and serve you wine in stemmed glasses of cobalt blue show you sweet shapes in clouds to erase past tragic blow bubbles from a wand filled with magic let sunlight bathe you in a summers day all wrapped in an afternoon where we can stay |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
a soft summer sound, Helen... very slick indeed.... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
There is a massive ancient Oak in Audobon Park that keeps this memory for me... ![]() (Remember how Autumn in New Orleans feels? well, at least the first "cool front" anyway) That's how this made me feel. Thanks for the rememory. |
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Auguste![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
A very nice afternoon you've painted here, Helen. |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
What an invitation....Surely this would be a most pleasing day....Very nicely written. |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
An afternoon delight! S Arthur |
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