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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Clouds Rain clouds shroud and gray my mind They reign within the mirrors glass A spider’s sanguine web of kind That chains me in its sticky mass Bound by thoughts of memories tie Merry-go-round the rays of sun Where flowers bloom of lily lies A vine matured of youthful fun Roots grown down to waters level Making rough and tough the vine Deep enough to hear the devil And make it grow a nasty spine. Spines rain down my head within Bringing reign of sorrows pain What once was fun has grown to sin And draws the blood of sound and sane. Be opine what you groom and plant Some vines may bloom to disenchant. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I know I got into some wine from a vine that made me very disenchanting but I hungover it till it passed. This is delightful Sy.....Always look forward to reading your daily when I get the chance (not working) "Roots grown down to waters level Making rough and tough the vine Deep enough to hear the devil And make it grow a nasty spine." I didn't know you knew my ex! The devil came to me once and said "I can make trouble for you, BIG TIME!" I said, "I know!" He said, 'aren't you afraid?" I replied, "uumm NO!" "Why?" he asked. "Well," I said, "I been married to your sister for fifteen years!" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you ethome, I see we get the same Email I read that joke the other day. But it sill brought a smile. Have a good one. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sy, this was not a nasty pine, whine or spine but it did have backbone and character. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Keth, Funny, funny, funny..... Thank's alot. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Rain clouds shroud and gray my mind They reign within the mirrors glass A spider's sanguine web of kind That chains me in its sticky mass ======================================= Deep enough to hear the devil And make it grow a nasty spine. Spines rain down my head within Bringing reign of sorrows pain What once was fun has grown to sin And draws the blood of sound and sane. Be opine what you groom and plant Some vines may bloom to disenchant. ====================================== They reign within the mirrors glass A spider's sanguine web of kind Could those lines be any cooler??  I've said it before ... I'll say it again ... there is magic in your pen. Every verse a seed of wisdom's vine ... You're like fine wine ... you get better with time.  *winkiewinkie*    We wish ourselves beautiful ... and cry in the night. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, You are throwing rose petals again and Randy is dancing in the middle of them. Haven't forgotten the CD's my daughter was away and now she is busy, it's just a matter of time. I hope all is well I'll try and write you tonight. WWRS |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
The all of me{s} are smiling over this one... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Vandana, Thank you. Decaflame Glad it's not part of you. Thank you |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy You are part of the day, and delightful.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This has evocative images. I liked the rain/reign thing, too, and the construction is faultless. Altogether a great poem. Nan |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Something to the effect of we reap what we sow.....Your wisdom always shines... Thanx Sy... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Awwwwwww, I understand this kind of nostalgia so well, sweet friend, whenever I cloudgaze and see shapes that seem so familiar to me I too reflect on so many memories and it is miraculous to me how clouds can do such that! (sigh) This is very well said, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
"Be opine what you groom and plant Some vines may bloom to disenchant" Telling the truth here! Sandra [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (07-05-2002 03:02 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pilgrimage, I like the altogether. Magnus, Good comment, thank you. Noah, Enjoyed your reply. Sandra, As I see it, thank you. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling boy this is absolutely utterly perfect again you’ve been imbibing wisdom and truth, and the result is always special. You always manage to cloak my soul in an aura of delight. Your words fall like moonlit shadows that grace the ground with silvered light. This is purely an amazing write again by you. I love it utterly utterly, YOU never cease to amaze me and always I value your writing. You can tell can’t you, drat I wonder what gives me away It must be my delicate hint of I love this utterly utterly that does it, hmmmmm?    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
always interesting to read what you offer I think I may not plant this year then I can't be disenchanted by what does or does not bloom... *s M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, Thank you dear but I think I would plant. |
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